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国内的大多数英文文章都掺杂了很多高级的词汇、大量的短语词组和复杂的句式句型，有时候糅合太多，反而会显得文章冗赘啰嗦，甚是尴尬。学会适当减持你的语言，好的文章应该是简洁凝练的。Never use ten words where five will do.

如何使英语论文语句更简练呢？

一、简化句子结构，增强活力和表现力

(1) 以it，here, or there be开头且指引的是句中的名词，同时句子里常常跟上to be/ to do的句子结构，比如it is, it was, here is, there is, therewill be……这些结构往往不再强调句中实际的驱动者成分，把true driver的意义稀释了，而且这种结构通常需要其他关系词来支撑和联接，如who, that and when，进一步dilute你的文章。比如：

✗ Wordy：It's fun to editing.

✔ Concise：Editing is fun.

✗Wordy：Here are some things to consider：

✔Concise：Some things to consider are:

(2) 把伴随动作状语改成副词，比如：

✗Wordy：Sympathizing with her concerns, he nodded in response to her complaint.

✔Concise：He nodded sympathetically in response to her complaint.

(3) 适当地把后置定语从句改成前置形容词，比如：

✗Wordy：Do not try to anticipate those events that will completely revolutionize society.

✔Concise：Do not try to anticipate revolutionary events.

(4) 介词短语改写，比如：

✗Wordy: Make sure you approach the conversation in a careful way.

✔Concise: Make sure you approach the conversation carefully.

(5)“which is” 、 “who were”等有时可以删除但保留原义且无伤语法，比如：

✗Wordy：We drove down Lombard Street, which is considered the crookedest street in the world.

✔Concise：We drove down Lombard Street,considered the crookedest street in the world.

二、可以用动词来描述的时候就尽量避开弱化语气的名词化表达

比如当你看到“verb+ a/an noun” 的组合结构,直接用实义动词来代替该短语，简化句子的同时增强句子活力。比如：

✗Wordy：The report gave an analysis of the accident.

✔Concise：The report analyzed the accident.

✗Wordy：Alcohol is the cause of hangovers.

✔Concise：Alcohol causes hangovers.

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